For Erin Noh
I think the photos could have a vignette or floor fade to be even clearer and continue the old hollywood vibe you have.
- I can see how easily this would fade in and out between desktop and mobile so I would be a great path to follow.
- I didn’t notice the drop shadow so darken that would help.
2nd version
also really nice! the photo needs more contrast, there are no bright white highlights to match the white text.
- I wonder why the top line of text is bigger in the desktop version but not the mobile version its just a small inconstancy.
- I think the quotes that pin the to bottom are more successful than the 2nd version. But i know its not possible to pin this Qoute to the bottom, if you change the type to san serif it will match with the rest even with different placement.
3rd verison
- The first and third version are very similar in font choice but the subtle drop shadow was really nice touch that could be brought into your first version.
consideration:
possibly add in color to bring more pop to the routes but I understand that doesn’t match the b&w film vibe your doing.