Mangosteen Mockup
Designer:
Camryn Cogshell
Creative Director:
Lauren Jin
Notes:
Over all I tried to keep the design simple and easy to understand through the labling of the sections. I think sections like "propgration" and "uses" could have better placement. I didnt notice this till I brought the images into the web browerser. I Think the problem might be type size. Also I would like to hear your opinion on use of colour. I think more colour could be used to break up the section but the examples you gave were more minimal.
(in the actual version I would take out all the foonotes ofc)